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Hello, I've given 5 sentences backed up by 3 sources, but I'm not sure if this meets the condition as far as well-constructed sentences go. It still looks like it needs improvement. Does this meet the requirements? [[User:Jonas Rand|Jonas Rand]] 13:43, 23 November 2009 (PST)
 
Hello, I've given 5 sentences backed up by 3 sources, but I'm not sure if this meets the condition as far as well-constructed sentences go. It still looks like it needs improvement. Does this meet the requirements? [[User:Jonas Rand|Jonas Rand]] 13:43, 23 November 2009 (PST)
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:It's a bit rough around the edges, but I'm a man of my word, and this is just the sort of effort that I've solicited.  How will I issue the $15 payment to you? -- [[User:MyWikiBiz|MyWikiBiz]] 13:50, 23 November 2009 (PST)