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==Could you look over my pitch?==

==Could you look over my pitch?==

I spent a few hours revamping my business and personal page because I got this "quick fix" idea. All of these new accounts get registered and all of their pages look terrible so I decided I would start page creations back up again and post a boiler plate message on new users talk pages about a simple 40 dollar service to format their page properly if they haven't figured it out. If 50 people register a week and 30 have no idea what to do I might get 1 or 2 clients but hey dollars to a starving college student isn't bad. Anyways - could you take a look at my boiler plate message to make sure it doesn't sound spammy or technosnobby. And is 40 bucks about right? [[Template:Quick Fix Help]]  

I spent a few hours revamping my business and personal page because I got this "quick fix" idea. All of these new accounts get registered and all of their pages look terrible so I decided I would start page creations back up again and post a boiler plate message on new users talk pages about a simple 40 dollar service to format their page properly if they haven't figured it out. If 50 people register a week and 30 have no idea what to do I might get 1 or 2 clients but hey 40-80 dollars to a starving college student isn't bad. Anyways - could you take a look at my boiler plate message to make sure it doesn't sound spammy or technosnobby. And is 40 bucks about right? [[Template:Quick Fix Help]]  

Thanks

Thanks

Garrett

Garrett