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'''Thanks'''-Peter Z
 
'''Thanks'''-Peter Z
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== Hi ==
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Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia.  I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article.  The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view.  I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms.  Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
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