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'''Wikipedia's''' article on  ''Dictator''  '''Josip Broz Tito''' and '''Titoism''' is mostly [[Communists|Communist]] propaganda of the now defunct ''Communist Party'' of the former Yugoslavia. As it turns out [[Criticism of Jimmy Wales|Jimmy Wales]] has provided a perfect vehicle for propaganda of this type. The articles are mainly written by Editors from Croatia and supported by other Editors who have communist leanings. It is written in a non-encyclopaedic fashion and does not represent contemporary views. Sections of Josip Broz Tito article about the Dictator are written in a child-like manner, similar to a Yugoslav primary school textbook from the 1970s.  
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'''Wikipedia's''' article on  ''Dictator''  '''Josip Broz Tito''' and '''Titoism''' is mostly [[Communists|Communist]] propaganda of the now defunct ''Communist Party'' of the former Yugoslavia. As it turns out [[Criticism of Jimmy Wales|Jimmy Wales]] has provided a perfect vehicle for propaganda of this type. The articles are mainly written by Editors from Croatia and supported by other Editors who have communist leanings. It is written in a non-encyclopaedic fashion and does not represent contemporary views. Sections of the ''Josip Broz Tito'' article about the Dictator are written in a child-like manner, similar to the Yugoslav primary school textbooks from the 1970s.  
    
After the fall of the '''Berlin Wall''' and the collapse of Yugoslavia, factual evidence has emerged that Josip Broz and his regime were responsible for executing mass murders, arrests and torture.The worst of these events are the ''Way of the Cross'',<ref>{{cite web|url=http://hrcak.srce.hr/index.php?show=clanak&id_clanak_jezik=27516&lang=en|title=Hrcak Portal of Scientific Journals of Croatia: An Addition to the Research of the Problem of Bleiburg & Way of the Cross|}} by Mr Dizdar's  
 
After the fall of the '''Berlin Wall''' and the collapse of Yugoslavia, factual evidence has emerged that Josip Broz and his regime were responsible for executing mass murders, arrests and torture.The worst of these events are the ''Way of the Cross'',<ref>{{cite web|url=http://hrcak.srce.hr/index.php?show=clanak&id_clanak_jezik=27516&lang=en|title=Hrcak Portal of Scientific Journals of Croatia: An Addition to the Research of the Problem of Bleiburg & Way of the Cross|}} by Mr Dizdar's  
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