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==Mission Statement==
 
==Mission Statement==
 
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''The IRC mission is to eliminate unethical practices and content on the Internet by educating the general public about the elements having measurable detrimental impacts on our society.  We strive to exercise journalistic excellence to present complex issues to the average citizen, while deepening our commitment to values like respect for others, personal responsibility, attribution of work, and common courtesy.''
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''The IRC mission is to eliminate unethical practices and content on the Internet by educating the general public about those elements having a measurable detrimental impact on our society.  We strive to exercise journalistic excellence to present complex issues to the average citizen, while deepening our commitment to values like respect for others, personal responsibility, attribution of work, and common courtesy.''
    
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The following concepts are critical in defining "who" your organization
 
The following concepts are critical in defining "who" your organization
 
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