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[http://www.mywikibiz.com/Special:Emailuser/Peter_Z. Email]
 
== My Discussion Page ==
 
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== Wikipedia’s Communist Propaganda Articles-Work Space==
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Is Wikipedia taking on a darker tone? Where are the ethical and moral issues involved in creating a feel good article about a man who played a major role in these historicial events? How many more articles are being written within Wikipedia that are just the point of view of its Editors (political, in this case).  This is not encyclopedic work, pure and simple.
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== Wikikpedia Review ==
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Is this type of phenomenon happening with other articles. Quite possible!
 
  
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== The Word According to Wikipedia ==
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Hi this is good - see if you can edit the talk pages of the parent article.  If not, leave something in my talk directory and I will edit it in.  Do you not belong to [http://wikipediareview.com/ Wikikpedia Review]?  That is the place where all the dirt is dished, these days.  There is a major scandal going on at the moment. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 11:56, 8 October 2009 (PDT)
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According to Wikipedia if a Commander happens to loss 100 000 POWs after WW2, is not that important. The information is not to be mention in his biography. Sixty years latter it was established that were murdered and place in old mine shafts and caves.
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:: Hm mm, there seems to be a lot more of dirt being dished out than I realized. Thanks for that! [[User:Peter Z.|Peter Z.]] 19:49, 9 October 2009 (PDT)
  
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== Notes on References ==
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'''Contemporary views''' of Josip Broz are clealy referenced:
 
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*'''Zdravko Dizdar''': Croatian Historian (Institute for History in Zagreb): Partisan/Communist Repression & Atrocities in Croatia/1944th to 1946th - Document: Hrcak Portal of Scientific Journals of Croatia
 
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'''Note:''' In Mr Dizdar's Scientific Journal he stated that Tito asked the "Croatian Home Guard" to surrender or face the consequences of not surrendering. After the war ended POWs who did not surrender were slaughter on mass, estimates are about 100 000 victims in total.
 
  
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*'''BBC'''.UK/History Partisans: War in the Balkans 1941 - 1945 By Dr Stephen A Hart
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Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia. I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article. The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view. I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms.  Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
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The article is written in the post ''Berlin Wall'' world. The Wiki article '''does not''' have the [[BBC]] as it's '''source'''.
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: PS See my links about Bleiburg [http://www.mywikibiz.com/User_talk:Ockham/Wikipedia_%26_Political_Agendas#The_Bleiberg_massacre] - the edits by 'Direktor' are laughable. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:43, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
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This encyclopaedic articles clearly state the dark truth about Tito and his Army:
 
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*'''Dr Stephen A Hart''' is senior lecturer in war studies at the Royal Military Academy Sandhurst. He is the author of The Road to Falaise: Operations 'Totalize' and 'Tractable' (Alan Sutton, 2004), and Montgomery and 'Colossal Cracks': The 21st Army Group in Northwest Europe, 1944-45 (Praeger, 2000). He is currently working with R Hart on The Ruins of the Reich: The Collapse of Nazi Germany in 1945, for Pearson Education
 
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*'''Encyclopaedia Britannica'''-The article is written post ''Berlin Wall'' but it's thin in terms of information, but does not hold back on economic realities  ''"At his death, the '''state treasury''' was '''empty'''"'' The Wiki article has Encyclopaedia Britannica  under its ''Notes'' section as it's source, it might be just cosmetic.
 
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*'''BBC''' UK/History by Tim Judah. The article is also written  in the post ''Berlin Wall'' world. The Wiki article '''does not''' have the [[BBC]] as it's '''source'''.
 
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*'''Tim Judah''' is a front line reporter for The Economist and author. A graduate of the London School of Economics and of the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy at Tufts University he worked for the BBC before becoming the Balkans correspondent for The Times and The Economist. During the Kosovo war he broadcast widely and wrote for the New York Review of Books, The Observer, The Sunday Telegraph and The Guardian Weekend magazine. Judah is also the author of the prizewinning The Serbs: History, Myth and the Destruction of Yugoslavia, published in 1997 by Yale University Press.
 
 
   
 
   
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*'''Ivo Goldstein''': 'Croatia A History', a Mc Gill Queen’s University Press Publication.
 
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:''“Self -management as system was only slightly more efficient than the Soviet model. It was bureaucratised and cumbersome and could not compete with Western economies. People could obtain so much free or for less than the market price (e.g. apartments) that they could be obtain without work. All this made the settling of accounts in the 1980s and in the post-socialist age more difficult.”''
 
  
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:''“In Tito’s system no interest or ideas could be expressed in a truly democratic way. This did most harm where feelings of ethnic identity were concerned because their suppression led to growth of extreme nationalism. Furthermore, the economic failure of Tito’s system, most clearly expressed in the protracted crisis of the 1980s, left people who even if they were not poor, were disillusioned and open to manipulation by demagogues. Finally Tito’s practical solutions ensured that he would retain unlimited power during his life time, but foreshadowed the problems would come after his death.”
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I can see this is all coming on nicely!  I am not always around but feel free to leave a message. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 05:18, 21 October 2009 (PDT)
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This is a factual statement, written in Ivo Goldstein: 'Croatia A History'. Josip Broz and his fellow communist were committing economic management suicide. The Wiki article does not have Ivo Goldstein  as it's source.
 
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:The articles clearly state:
 
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:1. Josip Broz Tito’s failure in adressing ethnic tensions of the former Yugoslavia;
 
  
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:2. Failure in the economic management of the former of Yugoslavia;
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'''Note''': Ivo Goldstein is a Professor at the University of Zagreb
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[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sir_Floyd Oh dear].  Toddst is an idiot, believe me. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 16:53, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
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The University of Zagreb [http://www.unizg.hr/homepage/] [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_of_Zagreb] (1669) is the oldest and biggest university in South-Eastern Europe. The university has 29 faculties, three art academies and the Centre for Croatian Studies. With its comprehensive programmes and over 50,000 full-time undergraduate and postgraduate students. The University is the strongest teaching institution in Croatia.  It offers a wide range of academic degree courses leading to Bachelor's, Master's and Doctoral degrees in the following fields: Arts, Biomedicine, Biotechnology, Engineering, Humanities, Natural and Social Sciences.
 
  
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'''Commission on Concealed Mass Graves in Slovenia'''-created by Government of the Republic of Slovenia.
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*'''Jože Dežman''': Slovenian Historian-Director of the National Museum of Contemporary History-Ljubljana (Slovenian) National Museum of Contemporary History- Slovenia
 
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*'''Mitja Ferenc''': Slovenian Historian-University of Ljubljana
 
  
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'''David W. Del Testa''' has a Ph.D. in History from the University of California at Davis.
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FYI, see [http://www.mywikibiz.com/index.php?title=Yagan_Memorial&diff=121814&oldid=120900 this edit], which was prompted by an e-mail request to me. The page is unlocked now, so you'd need to make an edit, any edit, to re-lock it to yourself. -- [[User:MyWikiBiz|MyWikiBiz]] 20:03, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
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The below referenced information is from 'Government Leaders, Military Rulers and Political Activists: An Encyclopaedia of People Who Changed the World (Lives & Legacies Series)’ by David W. Del Testa.
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:Thanks MyWikiBiz! [[User:Peter Z.|Peter Z.]] 01:22, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
  
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:''Yugoslavia under Tito was a curious combination of relative economic and cultural freedom and total political repression and control. The lack of political freedom made debate on the role of ethnic identity in Yugoslavia impossible. Tito’s regime had created temporary stability in a historically unstable region. Treated almost as a mythic hero in his lifetime, Tito’s image began to decay in the years following his death, undermining the legitimacy of the regime so connected to his cult of personality.'''
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== Concerning Racism and Wikipedia ==
  
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David W. Del Testa’s statement succinctly sums up Josip Broz and his political life. One could say it is well balanced in the objective sense.
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Peter,
  
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== Wikipedia & Political Agendas ==
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As you might have noticed, the material on that page is by [[Gregory Kohs]]. If you haven't done so yet, I'm sure he would appreciate if you drop him a line or two. You seemed to have a special concern for the history rewriting and other Balkan complex issues. These should be a no brainer if people respect the principle of neutrality. Even if there were ten different views of the same events they should all be presented together with their sources. Unfortunately, a lot of people don't have the foggiest idea of what that means. They believe that there is one NPOV, and that one and only that one should be described as historic fact. Even more unfortunate is the inability of the sysops to uphold that principle, mostly because they are biased themselves.
  
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I would like to expand the '''parent article''' with how the political spin is done on Wiki (which I'm going to add later). This could apply to all articles (you have already started on something similar, this is-'''great''').
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My work is far from complete. There are other topics that I still have not approached. If you believe you have any material that fits into what I'm trying to develop, please feel free to edit and contribute.
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Also the way Wiki is being run from within. Is it becoming more like George Orwell's  "1984 & Animal Farm" (with every passing day)? That is if you agree with this.
 
  
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Wiki's future and how this is going to affect information (political info & other) on the Internet (& society). Does it need to have a moral obligation (Yes) ?
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Wiki's editorial style of work ([http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Dalmatia]-scroll down to Balkanic business/Dalmatia not exactly Croatia) ''is this the way to build an encyclopedia''?
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Virgilio A. P. Machado
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The Four Corners  might not be suitable for the article?  [[User:Peter Z.|Peter Z.]] 19:22, 6 October 2009 (PDT)
 
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: Hi this is good - see if you can edit the talk pages of the parent article.  If not, leave something in my talk directory and I will edit it in.  Do you not belong to [http://wikipediareview.com/ Wikikpedia Review]?  That is the place where all the dirt is dished, these days.  There is a major scandal going on at the moment. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 11:56, 8 October 2009 (PDT)
 
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:: Hm mm, there seems to be a lot more of dirt being dished out than I realized. Thanks for that! [[User:Peter Z.|Peter Z.]] 19:49, 9 October 2009 (PDT)
 
  
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[[User:Vapmachado|vapmachado]] <sup>[[User talk:Vapmachado|msgs.cw]]</sup> 02:17, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
  
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Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia.  I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article.  The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view.  I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms.  Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
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: PS See my links about Bleiburg [http://www.mywikibiz.com/User_talk:Ockham/Wikipedia_%26_Political_Agendas#The_Bleiberg_massacre] - the edits by 'Direktor' are laughable. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:43, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
 
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ciao, I am your old Italian friend of wikipedia: you are the best editor of ex Yugoslavia related articles! Your account -Sir Floyd- is signature which means guarantee of documentation and competence: congratulations for your articles in this site! Further, I have some relatives in Australia: I admire Australian people and I like Australian rules football--[[User:Ziogemmo|Ziogemmo]] 14:52, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
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I can see this is all coming on nicely! I am not always around but feel free to leave a message. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 05:18, 21 October 2009 (PDT)
 

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Hi this is good - see if you can edit the talk pages of the parent article. If not, leave something in my talk directory and I will edit it in. Do you not belong to Wikikpedia Review? That is the place where all the dirt is dished, these days. There is a major scandal going on at the moment. Ockham 11:56, 8 October 2009 (PDT)

Hm mm, there seems to be a lot more of dirt being dished out than I realized. Thanks for that! Peter Z. 19:49, 9 October 2009 (PDT)

Hi

Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia. I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article. The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view. I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms. Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards Ockham 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)

PS See my links about Bleiburg [1] - the edits by 'Direktor' are laughable. Ockham 04:43, 4 October 2009 (PDT)


I can see this is all coming on nicely! I am not always around but feel free to leave a message. Ockham 05:18, 21 October 2009 (PDT)

Oh dear

Oh dear. Toddst is an idiot, believe me. Ockham 16:53, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

FYI

FYI, see this edit, which was prompted by an e-mail request to me. The page is unlocked now, so you'd need to make an edit, any edit, to re-lock it to yourself. -- MyWikiBiz 20:03, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

Thanks MyWikiBiz! Peter Z. 01:22, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

Concerning Racism and Wikipedia

Peter,

As you might have noticed, the material on that page is by Gregory Kohs. If you haven't done so yet, I'm sure he would appreciate if you drop him a line or two. You seemed to have a special concern for the history rewriting and other Balkan complex issues. These should be a no brainer if people respect the principle of neutrality. Even if there were ten different views of the same events they should all be presented together with their sources. Unfortunately, a lot of people don't have the foggiest idea of what that means. They believe that there is one NPOV, and that one and only that one should be described as historic fact. Even more unfortunate is the inability of the sysops to uphold that principle, mostly because they are biased themselves.

My work is far from complete. There are other topics that I still have not approached. If you believe you have any material that fits into what I'm trying to develop, please feel free to edit and contribute.

Sincerely,

Virgilio A. P. Machado

vapmachado msgs.cw 02:17, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

best

ciao, I am your old Italian friend of wikipedia: you are the best editor of ex Yugoslavia related articles! Your account -Sir Floyd- is signature which means guarantee of documentation and competence: congratulations for your articles in this site! Further, I have some relatives in Australia: I admire Australian people and I like Australian rules football--Ziogemmo 14:52, 16 January 2013 (UTC)

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